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>it´s certainly confusing to review these pieces. Not only because it´s a test but because the vision and ideas weren´t completely explored nor intended to give a big exposition. With the Revolution fic, at least, I had pretty clear from the start that one should put a serious mindset but for tests that simply happen, one doesn´t know where to land at giving observations. I suppose that for tests there will be no ratings and simply feedback and a few reflections here and there.
Yeah. Though the next prototype fic is a bit bigger and a bit deeper in meaning, it is still a prototype testing something over a fully realized story.

>So basically, you certainly threw those dismissive lines that can perfectly happen in the future. There´s no way to guess that inspiration because that dismissive attitude is so universal and transverse to anybody that I would fail miserably trying to find where it cam from, nor I would give those thoughts in the first place.
>everything is a box full of surprises. Not only the fic itself but the roots of inspiration for such imagination or ideas that are reflected on the final product. I didn´t imagine that you had in mind that political mindset which ended up being thrown around here.
Yeah. There really is no political meaning other than me taking inspiration from those questionable but effect strategy and applying it to Sweetie Belle in a sad funk just being rudely dismissive.

>huh? at what point did she do this? I wouldn´t have guessed that those dismissive lines would come from there. When did it happen in the show?
She never made a specific remark in the show but I was just thinking about Rarity's general attitude with colors an fashion. Remember when she was freaking out in boast busters over a green mane and was insulting green as a color? It was something I could imagine Rarity saying, or Sweetie, being subject to long lectures of her older sister on matching colors and what not, just coming up with it on the fly.